To disarm is not to conquer
but ready, aim; does not stand
for a queen reduced if
caution from eight feet back is
Free
Extinguish paper and sweep fire to
self-reliant few who
spit electrical permanence like
government policy
Costs out of sight incite
careless injury
and what a waste a mind on fire
if it incinerates emergency like
(audio-visual) storms
I think that the last two stanzas are really impressive, but the first one doesn't make much sense. Try rewording it for clarity.
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